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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:08, 8 February 2020 (UTC)

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Danzen! Futari wa Pretty Cure

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Created by Miraclepine (talk). Self-nominated at 17:54, 16 January 2020 (UTC).

  • : Article created on January 16, the same day it was nominated, therefore it classifies as new.
  • It has 2423 characters (414 words) "readable prose size"
  • Unlikely copyright violation with 2.9% of confidence.
  • I think the hook has some issues. It does not feature the title of the song directly (hidden as "the theme song"). It does not state who performs the track, or where was the original version used (it just says it was the first theme song of the Pretty Cure franchise, but it's not clear if Pretty Cure is an anime series, or an anime movie). The article itself had some issues, such as using italics with songs instead of "quotation marks". I would suggest a different hook, which would be something like:

"... that different versions of the song "Danzen! Futari wa Pretty Cure" by Mayumi Gojo were used on the 25th movie and first two seasons of the Pretty Cure anime franchise?"

  • I'm waiting for the nominator to address my comments. Regards, Paparazzzi (talk) 06:35, 2 February 2020 (UTC)
  • @Paparazzzi: I've fixed it and I've tidied my hook is as follows:
ALT2: ... that different versions of the song "Danzen! Futari wa Pretty Cure" by Mayumi Gojo were used on the first two seasons and 25th movie of the Pretty Cure anime franchise?"

::ALT3: ... that the first theme song of the Pretty Cure anime franchise, "Danzen! Futari wa Pretty Cure" by Mayumi Gojo, was remade for its fifteen anniversary crossover?

ミラP 13:26, 2 February 2020 (UTC)
Hook ALT2 approved . Wait for another user to promote the hook. Regards, Paparazzzi (talk) 23:51, 6 February 2020 (UTC)
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