Template:Did you know nominations/David Green (civil engineer)

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:39, 22 September 2018 (UTC)

David Green (civil engineer)[edit]

Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Self-nominated at 16:03, 14 August 2018 (UTC).

  • New, long enough, both hooks not long and sourced. original is definitely more interesting. QPQ done.
I added one tag and also not sure if the redlink individual needs to be there.
The references (which are complete) seem to all link to industry sources/journals and are not braoder so i'm not 100% sure if that's DYKable.Lihaas (talk) 19:09, 19 September 2018 (UTC)
Hi Lihaas, thanks for your review. I have expanded the sentence you tagged with "which" to name the company. With regards the redlink Roger Norman Sainsbury is a former ICE president and is notable, he is on my list of articles to create. In terms of the referencing I am not sure there are any other sources I can bring in. The guy spent his career in civil engineering so naturally most of what is written about him comes from the industry journals. Let me know if there is anything else you need doing - Dumelow (talk) 19:37, 19 September 2018 (UTC)
I found a couple more sources and was able to expand the article a bit more - Dumelow (talk) 19:52, 19 September 2018 (UTC)
Made a couple of changes, but there is some extra characters with the double space before a new sentence. Still, AGF. Lihaas (talk) 12:14, 21 September 2018 (UTC)
Thanks Lihaas. Don't worry about the double sentence spacing, it depends on where you were taught to type. The wiki software condenses any multiple spacings into a single space anyway - see MOS:PUNCTSPACE - Dumelow (talk) 12:51, 21 September 2018 (UTC)