Template:Did you know nominations/Dean Lyness
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 04:01, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
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Dean Lyness
[edit]- ... that goalkeeper Dean Lyness, an unused substitute for his first three league clubs as a teenager, finally made his Football League debut with his fourth?
- Reviewed: Frank Clark (American football)
- Comment: The unused sub for first 3 clubs bit is stated explicitly near the end of the Heart of Midlothian section, his FL debut is at the start of the 2nd paragraph of the Burton Albion section.
5x expanded by Struway2 (talk). Self nominated at 20:21, 22 December 2013 (UTC).
- Reviewing now... Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 22:16, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
Major expansion took place on 22nd Dec, from an original two sentences. All sources are online (and are of suitable reliability); I have checked about two-thirds for consistency with the article, copyvio/close paraphrasing and so on. (I reworded one sentence slightly.) The hook fact is referenced by a combination of two refs, which is fine. NB. Reference [15] isn't working; I suspect it's a typo in the URL or something like that. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 22:57, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
