Template:Did you know nominations/Death Rates in the 20th Century

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by Rcsprinter (chatter) @ 17:20, 10 December 2012 (UTC)

Death Rates in the 20th Century

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• ... that, in the 20th century, maternal death rates decreased by nearly 99%?

Created/expanded by Pepephend (talk), Fupaphil (talk). Nominated by Pepephend (talk) at 15:36, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

• I helped you fix the hook. --George Ho (talk) 15:45, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

• This article needs more inline references. Also, this article needs a rewrite and restructure. There are too many other things I cannot concisively describe. --George Ho (talk) 15:58, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
• This is a brand-new user, a student at Mount Allison University, and the article talk page has ' :Category:Wikipedia Ambassador Program student projects

• Let's start with DYK Onepage for some guidelines

• Article created by TimShell on April 7, 2001 - this would be a "Fivefold Expansion" nomination. It needs 5X expansion of the existing article within 5 days of nomination. This was nominated on Nov 20, so 5 days before was Nov 15

• Currently is 4,955 characters of readable prose (characters in the table are not counted)
• 5 days before the nomination, Nov 15, it was 4,927 characters of readable prose
• Pepephend actually began expanding on Oct 29. Prior edit was on March 21, and had 1,205 characters

• This article is tagged for having no lead section
• Most of the paragraphs have no sourcing
• The paragraph that mentions the hook is not sourced

That's a start. It needs work. — Maile (talk) 02:22, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

• Neither of the creators of the article have edited on Wikipedia since the day this was nominated, two weeks ago. Allowing until the end of the day on December 14 for issues to be addressed; given the class schedule, edits should be made by then if this article is still actively being pursued as part of course work. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:26, 4 December 2012 (UTC)

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