Template:Did you know nominations/Displaced aggression

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 00:50, 20 July 2022 (UTC)

Displaced aggression

Created by Bruxton (talk). Self-nominated at 21:40, 16 June 2022 (UTC).

  • @Bruxton: New enough and long enough. QPQ present. Suggest adding a caption to the image of a cat in the lead section, also. ALT0: hook fact is not in article with this citation (though the article structure says as much). ALT1 is in the definition but there is no citation or other use to mention this. ALT2 checks out. I prefer ALT0 and ALT2 personally. No textual issues, but pinging/holding to allow the nominator to add appropriate citation invocations to allow ALT0 and ALT1. Ping when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 00:46, 18 July 2022 (UTC)
@Sammi Brie: thanks for the review! I believe I fixed up the issues outlined! Bruxton (talk) 00:57, 18 July 2022 (UTC)
I can't find ALT1 in there, so I'm striking it (it's a weak definitional hook, in my opinion). I am approving ALT0 and ALT2. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 02:14, 18 July 2022 (UTC)
@Bruxton and Sammi Brie: I am concerned about this hook because the article mentions that displaced aggression is an example of road rage, not a cause. Suggesting an ALT below:
Thoughts? Z1720 (talk) 18:56, 19 July 2022 (UTC)
Thumbs up icon ok by me. Bruxton (talk) 19:16, 19 July 2022 (UTC)
Yes, that's better. ALT0 or ALT2a only. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 19:47, 19 July 2022 (UTC)