Template:Did you know nominations/Dowa Yalanne

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The result was: promoted to prep area 3 by Jsayre64 (talk) 16:37, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Dowa Yalanne[edit]

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... that injured bald eagles in northwestern New Mexico are ensured a view of a mesa from their cages?

ALT1:... that Dakota is atop a corn mountain?
Reviewed: Eric Butler-Henderson

Created by Djembayz (talk). Nominated by Rcsprinter123 (talk) at 22:18, 7 February 2014 (UTC).

All looks good except the history section needs more inline citations. I would go with the original hook and perhaps say that the caged eagles are at a bird sanctuary. Jsayre64 (talk) 01:57, 18 February 2014 (UTC)

ALT2:... that injured bald eagles at a bird sanctuary in northwestern New Mexico are ensured a view of a mesa from their cages? Rcsprinter₁₂₃ (whisper) @ 02:10, 18 February 2014 (UTC)

Looks like a perfect hook to me. Jsayre64 (talk) 02:26, 18 February 2014 (UTC)

Is this approved then? Rcsprinter₁₂₃ (cackle) @ 01:01, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
- It will be once you source the rest of the history section to meet criterion 4 of the rules. Jsayre64 (talk) 05:00, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

OK, I have added some more sources. Rcsprinter₁₂₃ (lecture) @ 12:55, 19 February 2014 (UTC)