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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by — Maile (talk) 22:29, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

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Drew Live[edit]

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Moved to mainspace by JuneGloom07 (talk). Self nominated at 00:19, 23 February 2014 (UTC).

  • - Legnth, date, QPQ, and cite all check. Best, Mifter (talk) 01:10, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
  • - Hook is not quite clear to me; perhaps I'm just dumb. But once for each of which time zones? Throughout the world? In the US? Please clarify this before promotion. Needs a bit of a tweaking to make sense. EagerToddler39 (talk) 02:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
The following minor rewording should resolve EagerToddler's concern (because it doesn't matter which time zones are being referred to, as long as the hook doesn't suggest that there are only three time zones in the world):
However, I'm concerned about some WP:close paraphrasing in the article. Examples:
  • Source: Carey and his cast will perform the episode three times, once for each time zone, and will play "improvisational games" in each
  • Article: Aucoin said the cast would perform the episode three times, once for each time zone, and would play improvised games in each version.
  • Source: Helford came up with the improv idea after seeing the much-ballyhooed live episode of "ER"
  • Article: Helford came up with the idea for "Drew Live" after seeing the live episode of medical drama ER
  • Source: Since "Carey" cast members Christa Miller and Diedrich Bader are not improv comics, Stiles says part of his job will be damage control.
  • Article: As his co-stars Miller and Diedrich Bader were not improv comics, Stiles admitted that part of his job during filming was "damage control."
Those are just examples of what I found in a cursory review. The article needs a thorough scrub to eliminate close paraphrasing of its sources.--Orlady (talk) 16:54, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
I'll sort it straight away. – JuneGloom Talk 17:45, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
I've been through the whole article (using the Duplication Detector to help) and hopefully I've sorted everything. As for the hook, I like ALT1. Unless it's better to mention the names of the time zones to avoid confusion? So...
  • All of my concerns are resolved. Thanks! I prefer the ALT1 hook; I don't think the names of the time zones add value to the hook. --Orlady (talk) 18:39, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
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