Template:Did you know nominations/Edric Norfolk Vaux Morisset

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:46, 29 December 2017 (UTC)

Edric Norfolk Vaux Morisset[edit]

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... that in 1860, Edric Norfolk Vaux Morisset became the first Inspector General of Police in Queensland ? Source: [1]
- ALT1:... that Edric Norfolk Vaux Morisset was appointed as a Lieutenant in the Native Police at age the of 23? Source: [2]

Created/expanded by Mahveotm (talk) and Dippiljemmy (talk). Nominated by Mahveotm (talk) at 12:14, 21 November 2017 (UTC).

Long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ not done.CrossTemple Jay 12:36, 24 November 2017 (UTC)

During this brief period, however, Morisset managed to aggrieve at least one member of the public to the point where a valuable dog of his was deliberately poisoned please consider rewriting this line to make for simpler reading.

Your observations have been noted concerning the DYK nomination of Edric Norfolk Vaux Morisset and the sentence has been reworded. As this is my first DYK nomination, Quid pro quo is not necessary. Kindly help me add Dippiljemmy to the credit as he started the article, I only approved it for AfC.

Ready now. Added user Dippiljemmy to credits. A closer can choose which hook to use. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crosstemplejay (talk • contribs) 11:40, 28 November 2017 (UTC)