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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  Ohc ¡digame! 09:18, 12 February 2014 (UTC)

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Eriberto Arroyo Mío[edit]

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Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 04:15, 27 January 2014 (UTC).

  • Length's ok-- one note: the article text says he died April 29, but the source says April 27. --HectorMoffet (talk) 08:57, 1 February 2014 (UTC)
  • The review needs more details, in accordance with. DYK review instructions please begin with one of the 5 review symbols that appear at the top of the edit screen, and then indicate all aspects of the article that you have reviewed. Details that are supposed to be checked in a review can be found at DYKReviewing guide— Maile (talk) 00:37, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
Maybe a new reviewer, as the original reviewer now has "semi-retired" on their user page.— Maile (talk) 17:06, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
Long enough, new enough, QPQ done, no copyvios detected, hook short enough but uninteresting - would suggest the following:
  • ALT1: ... that Peruvian leftist parliamentarian Eriberto Arroyo Mío was assassinated whilst driving his son to school?--Launchballer 15:15, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Comment, I would be ok with ALT1. The error in the date of death is corrected now. --Soman (talk) 00:32, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
Fine by me, but I can't approve my own hooks.
New reviewer needed to review the hook.--Launchballer 00:49, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Article is new enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. I added some identification of the subject from the original hook to the alt. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:11, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Changed "killed" to "assassinated". I did the same in the article. Otherwise, it sounds like he was killed in a road accident. Yoninah (talk) 22:42, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
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