Template:Did you know nominations/Ethel Page
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 02:07, 1 February 2018 (UTC)
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Ethel Page[edit]
Ethel Page
- ... that the first time Ethel Page met her husband – a future Australian prime minister – he set her on fire? Source: from a book, but here are some contemporary sources that I found [1] [2] as backup
- Reviewed: Humphrey IV of Toron
Created by Ivar the Boneful (talk). Self-nominated at 17:27, 29 January 2018 (UTC).
- I like the hook very much! The page checks out for newness, length, originality, and policy requirements. I found it quite interesting. Much of the sourcing depends on a book that is not available online, but facts sourced to the book that overlap with sources that I could access check out as supported by the sources I could read, so I'm satisfied that the sources support the content. The supplemental sources for the hook support it fully. The image is good, and properly licensed. There still needs to be a quid pro quo review. One issue about the page: in the Marriage and children section, it says: "and in 1904 convinced her to move to the country" – it was not clear to me which country was moved from, and which country was moved to, so please clarify that. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:07, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Tryptofish. I've completed a review of my own, and clarified the sentence that you mentioned. Ivar the Boneful (talk) 08:36, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
Everything is good to go. Thanks for the nice work. --Tryptofish (talk) 18:51, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
- @Ivar the Boneful: I am happy to promote the hook, but I suggest you add the extra sources above to the referencing so readers can look them up. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 02:05, 1 February 2018 (UTC)
