Template:Did you know nominations/Fred Evans (boxer)

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Lee Vilenski (talk) 17:33, 23 January 2020 (UTC)

Fred Evans (boxer)

5x expanded by Kosack (talk). Self-nominated at 13:11, 2 January 2020 (UTC).

  • I'll review this one. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:37, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Checking with Earwig's copyvio Detector it shows a 23.7% chance of plagiarism. As you can see it is a word-for-word copy of the source. This should be reworded and put into your OWN words, not a copy of source. I'll finish reviewing after this is corrected. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:50, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
  • That part was part of the original version before I overhauled the page. I neglected to check that info, reworded now. Kosack (talk) 15:03, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks for rewording, however there is room for additional improvement. Could you do some more tweaking and then I will feel more comfortable that it is not close paraphrasing and won't be questioned by others. The wording I am concerned about is here in red. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:17, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
  • I've knocked it down a bit more. Kosack (talk) 15:24, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks, that will work. Five times expansion from ~1000 to over 8000 and nominated in time is good. Everything checks alright now. Good to go.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:44, 4 January 2020 (UTC)