Template:Did you know nominations/Gappo Park

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:10, 4 May 2020 (UTC)

Gappo Park

The southern entrance to Gappo Park
The southern entrance to Gappo Park
  • ... that Gappo Park is the Japanese city of Aomori's oldest public park? Source: [1]
  • ALT1 ... that Gappo Park's construction led to the death of its designer in 1885? Source:[2]

Created by Mccunicano (talk). Self-nominated at 03:16, 14 April 2020 (UTC).

  • Starting rewiew:
General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

Image eligibility:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The article is new and long enough, it is neutral, and no plagiarism has been detected, the hooks are interesting (better ALT1 for me, maybe citing the reason of the death), the picture is free and used in the article. However, there are some problems: a couple of paragraphs don't have inline citations (I marked them); The hooks are not cited in the article: there should be a citation at the end of the hook's sentence; finally, the picture is not clear at 100px. After solving these three issues, the article should be ok. Alex2006 (talk) 17:55, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

@Alessandro57: Thanks for taking the time to review this. I've added listed the references throughout the article. As for the image, ideally I'd just go take a better one to display for the park, but, as its closed due to the pandemic, I guess it'll have to do without. All of the other images on commons or the page seem to me to be more representative of specific features of the park rather than the park as a whole. Mccunicano☕️ 03:58, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for correcting the problems! Good to go, with my preference for ALT1 and without image. Alex2006 (talk) 06:48, 16 April 2020 (UTC)