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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:22, 10 July 2016 (UTC)

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Gender inequality in South Korea[edit]

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Created/expanded by Piotrus (talk). Self-nominated at 11:26, 22 June 2016 (UTC).

  • Some issues found.
    • ✓ This article has been expanded from 462 chars to 4872 chars since 22:00, 09 June 2016 (UTC), a 10.55-fold expansion
    • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 4872 characters
    • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
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    • ✗ There is possible close paraphrasing on this article with 20.6% confidence. (confirm)
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  • ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 131 characters
  • ✓ This is Piotrus's 413th nomination. A QPQ review of Template:Did you know nominations/Christy Jenkins was performed for this nomination.

Automatically reviewed by DYKReviewBot. This bot is experimental; please report any issues. This is not a substitute for a human review. --DYKReviewBot (report bugs) 23:16, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

  • Full review by human reviewer needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:23, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
  • The article is well written, and the DYKReviewbot clearly does not understand that quoting is okay if attributed in-text, which is what the article does. I am relying on bot's check for the rest of DYK checklist. There is an issue with the hook though. @Piotrus: I can neither find in the article what the hook claims, nor can I find support for the hook in a WP:RS. The hook claims "on average only half", but this source which the article uses, states "this means female workers made just 62.6% of what their male counterparts did." Could you explain this, and appropriately clarify/revise the article? Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 00:24, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
  • @Ms Sarah Welch: There is also the "wage equality for similar work (0.55)". How about ALT1:
  • @Piotrus: On page 220 of the WEF's GGG-2015 source in the article, 0.55 is the score, but the sample average is 0.6 for South Korea. The score seems to be a statistical construct, see pages 6-7. Please check and clarify. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 11:49, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
Sample average refers to the average score across all the countries in the GGIndex. Score of 0.55 means female to male ratio of 0.55 in this context, so in other words, females in SK earn 55% of what males earn, ceteris paribus.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:35, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
  • @Piotrus: I will accept that clarification, in good faith. What about the 62.6% claim in this source that refers to a OECD study – should that be mentioned in the article for NPOV? I will be more comfortable with an ALT hook which replaces "only slightly over a half" with "55%". Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 14:01, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
  • @Ms Sarah Welch: 55% refers to the 2015 GG index, whereas as you pointed out, the OECD gives a somewhat higher one for about 63%, which I've now added to the text. As we have two different numbers, I do think a "slightly over a half", which covers both of them, is better then citing only one number. Alternatively, we could do ALT2 below. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 18:16, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
  • for ALT2. Thanks for adding the OECD data, as that improves the NPOV of the article. I am unconfortable with ALT1's "slightly over", which could be interpreted as 50.1% or 51%, when the actual is likely between 55 to 62%. I have struck out "only" in ALT2, but leave it to the nominator and DYK admins to reinstate it if they want to. Thanks for an interesting, topical article. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 18:35, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
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