Template:Did you know nominations/General Alliance against Racism and for Respect for French and Christian Identity

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:28, 9 February 2018 (UTC)

General Alliance against Racism and for Respect for French and Christian Identity[edit]

Created by Iselilja (talk). Self-nominated at 17:38, 31 January 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: The World Politics quote is actually on page 20, not 72. In the article the citation should ideally be directly after the fact, e.i. after "... and anti-semitic.'" It would have been more interesting if the hook stated more clearly the irony of the lawsuit, e.i. the Catholics were a powerful majority group. But this would probably make the hook too long. Farang Rak Tham (talk) 13:34, 7 February 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the review and for putting up the talk page which I had ignored. I have rewritten the paragraph that included the hook fact, and the first line in the paragraph now says, I think, pretty much the same as the hook, and has inline citation right after the fact. As for page numbers: I am using the page numbers from the World Politics journal, where this article makes up pages 53 to 85. When I first started reading the article, it was open access and I have downloaded it, and it has these page numbers. I see the article unfortunately no longer has open access, so you had to use Sci-hub and there the article starts at page 1, but that's "unofficial" page numbering I think. Sorry for the inconvenience. I included pages 20-21 as an alternative in the citation in article. As for the hook, I believe saying "powerful, majority group" might constitute "editorializing" and I think it goes without saying that Catholics are the traditional majority in France. Otherwise, I agree that the hook could have been better, so I would certainly be open for suggestions, but the length of the name makes it difficult to say a lot (unless you shorten the name to AGRIF and only pipe the full name). Iselilja (talk) 22:03, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
Looks good to me. It is allowed to use paywalled sources, no inconvenience caused. Passing.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 09:30, 8 February 2018 (UTC)