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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:32, 21 December 2020 (UTC)

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Gonen Ben Itzhak

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Created/expanded by Omert33 (talk). Self-nominated at 10:56, 26 November 2020 (UTC).

  • Drive-by comment: There are too many names and nicknames here. Please shorten the hooks. Yoninah (talk) 23:41, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Comment: Added ALT2 and ALT3 for consideration. --Omer Toledano (talk) 09:32, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Ready for review. Yoninah (talk) 11:25, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
  • The Biography section, the first half of the Shin Bet position section, the second sentence in the Social activism section, and the Personal life section needs to be referenced. I see that "a former Shin Bet coordinator" for ALT2 is in the lead, but it needs to appear in the body of the articles and needs to have a direct citation right after the sentence. The same goes for "one of the leading figures in the protests against Benjamin Netanyahu". For ALT2, "Ben Itzhak is among the founding members of "Hoze Hadash" (New Contract) movement, better known as "Crime Minister" also needs a direct citation at the end of the sentence. For ALT3, where is the word "prominent" coming from? Other than that, I assume good faith on the Hebrew references and a QPQ is not needed. SL93 (talk) 04:04, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • @SL93:, I have gone ahead and added the citations. I believe I have addressed everything. Thank you. --Omer Toledano (talk) 14:49, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • @Omert33: Some issues still need to be fixed. I think it might be easier in a list.
  • The Biography section has no citations.
  • The sentence is "Ben Itzhak is a member of "Israel Yekara Lanu" (Israel is Dear to Us) fighting against the cost of living in Israel." under Social activism is unreferenced.
  • "a former Shin Bet coordinator" still needs to also appear in the body of the article with a citation.
  • "one of the leading figures in the protests against Benjamin Netanyahu" still needs to also appear in the body of the article with a citation. SL93 (talk) 15:43, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • I see that you added the citations to the lead which is fine to me. I'm just updating what needs to be fixed for my benefit. - "Biography section needs to be referenced". SL93 (talk) 16:18, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • @SL93: Done. I have now addressed everything on your list. --Omer Toledano (talk) 16:21, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Awesome. I appreciate the quick fixes. This is ready with either ALT2 or ALT3. SL93 (talk) 16:34, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, and did some editing to remove repetitive text. Please explain in a few words what "The Gas Plan" is. Much of what you're writing about his social activism is not explained well and will be unintelligible to non-Israeli readers. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 18:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: I added clarification in regards to "The Gas Plan". I trust that should suffice. --Omer Toledano (talk) 19:25, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Restoring tick per SL93's review. Yoninah (talk) 19:31, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
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