Template:Did you know nominations/Green Groweth the Holly

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:35, 22 December 2018 (UTC)

Green Groweth the Holly[edit]

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... that the Christmas carol "Green Groweth the Holly" was composed and written by King Henry VIII? Source: British Library

Reviewed: Wang Guangying
Comment: For the obligatory Christmas carol on Christmas Day (25th December)

Moved to mainspace by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 09:02, 13 November 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:

@The C of E: I've got several sourcing issues. Namely:

"During Medieval times, Christmas carols had started to develop a separate style from ordinary Christian hymns" - I can't find this in the source cited inline
"it is presumed to have been written between 1510 and 1520" - the source says "Anthology of mostly secular pieces probably copied in London ca. 1510-1520". It was copied in that time range, but was it written then?
the quote in source [9], which is offline

Juxlos (talk) 21:22, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

- @Juxlos: I have fixed the issues. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 22:04, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
  - You did. Passed now. Juxlos (talk) 22:06, 13 November 2018 (UTC)