Template:Did you know nominations/H. T. Cadbury-Brown
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The result was: promoted by Yazan (talk) 02:20, 16 November 2012 (UTC)
H. T. Cadbury-Brown[edit]
- ... that British architect H. T. Cadbury-Brown served with the Royal Artillery in the war but did not fire a shot from Normandy to Germany?
Created/expanded by Kenchikuben (talk). Self nom at 22:13, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
Excellent well-cited article; length, date OK; hook confirmed by online reference. But I think we should specify which war, and maybe clarify the hook. How about:
- ALT1 ... that British architect H. T. Cadbury-Brown served with the Royal Artillery in the Second World War but made it all the way from Normandy to Germany without firing a shot?
- I agree with your suggestion, the shortened "war" kind of works within the context of the article (although I will now change it) but it is unclear which war it refers to when used with the DYK. Are you able to make the amendment to the DYK or do I do it? Thanks. Kenchikuben (talk) 16:06, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
for ALT1. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 18:18, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
- I agree with your suggestion, the shortened "war" kind of works within the context of the article (although I will now change it) but it is unclear which war it refers to when used with the DYK. Are you able to make the amendment to the DYK or do I do it? Thanks. Kenchikuben (talk) 16:06, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
