Template:Did you know nominations/Hawaii Sesquicentennial half dollar

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The result was: promoted by — Maile (talk) 20:43, 18 September 2015 (UTC)

Hawaii Sesquicentennial half dollar[edit]

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... that sculptor Chester Beach was so tired of complaints about the design of the Hawaii Sesquicentennial half dollar (reverse pictured) that he suggested he be sent to Hawaii to absorb the atmosphere?

Reviewed: Landscape by Sesshū (Ōhara Collection)

Created by Wehwalt (talk). Nominated by Crisco 1492 (talk) at 04:19, 26 August 2015 (UTC).

above 1.5k characters, sourcing/NPOV is good, image is OTRS-confirmed for permissions, hook is sourced in article and "hooky". New reviewer here, so second opinion may be warranted. ^BLUSTER⌉⌊_BLASTER 12:14, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

Hook is grammatically incorrect. sst^flyer 10:03, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

You are allowed to fix grammar if you can see how it can be improved ..... I've had a go Victuallers (talk) 13:33, 15 September 2015 (UTC)

This article is new enough and long enough. I have further tweaked the hook which refers to a quotation and is reliably sourced. The image is properly licensed and the article is neutral. The sources are almost entirely offline so I could not consider whether there were any copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:32, 16 September 2015 (UTC)