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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  — Amakuru (talk) 14:09, 7 September 2019 (UTC)

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Henry Lewis (musician)

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  • ... that the African-American conductor Henry Lewis conducted the Seventh Army Symphony Orchestra in support of American's cultural diplomacy initiatives after World War II? Source: Uncle Sam's Orchestra: Memories of the Seventh Army Orchestra John Canaria, University of Rochester Press 1998; New Music New Allies Amy C. Beal, University of California Press, Berkley, 2006, P. 49

5x expanded by 2620:65:8000:a203:85dc:6632:19e3:1d53 (talk); 2620:65:8000:a203:a033:d245:a813:d7b6 (talk). Nominated by 78.26 (talk) at 20:45, 30 August 2019 (UTC).

Article is a legitimate x5 expansion, is of an appropriate length, passed a copyvio check and has a cited and reasonably interesting hook, and the QPQ is done. There are a couple of issues however. Firstly there are two sentences which are unsourced near the end - for the Grammy award, and the reference to his daughter. Secondly, the discography is sourced to discogs.com, which is a user-generated site and therefore presumably unreliable. Finally, many of the citations are duplicated and should be consolidated; also, many of the citations link the entire cite instead of just the name of the cited work; these issues should be fixed before the article is promoted IMO. Gatoclass (talk) 13:25, 2 September 2019 (UTC)

I started work on consolidating the references myself - I will try to finish the job tomorrow. Gatoclass (talk) 15:34, 2 September 2019 (UTC)

Thank you Gatoclass. I removed the discogs reference. All the entries contain catalog numbers, so the releases are self-sourced. I'll try find a citation for the two sentences which are unsourced, else I'll remove them. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 00:10, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
I have sourced those two sentences. I removed part of one sentence because I couldn't meet WP:V. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 15:36, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
Ciao fellow editors - I added a reference link to worldcat.org for the Discography section for additional documentation, and an additional reference citation from the "Encyclopedia of the African And African-American Experience" for the Bibliography Section and included a Filmography Section with a reference citation for Lewis's educational film. I hope it helps! Many thanks to all for your fine efforts! Respectfully, — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2620:65:8000:a203:2d52:bbf4:1f35:29c3 (talk) 19:33, 3 September 2019 (UTC)GCU


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.
Overall: Thank you to 78.26 and the IP for prompt responses. I think the concerns I raised have been sufficiently addressed at this point. Gatoclass (talk) 15:33, 6 September 2019 (UTC)
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