Template:Did you know nominations/Herman Postma

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 02:33, 10 February 2013 (UTC)

Herman Postma

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• ... that despite graduating from Duke, Harvard and MIT, Herman Postma returned to high school to learn Russian?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Khasi Katha– A Goat Saga
• Comment: The image isn't great, but it is free.

Created by James086 (talk). Self nom at 16:48, 8 February 2013 (UTC)

• The article is obviously long enough and new enough. It appears to meet all requirements, as does the hook. I would suggest amending the hook a little bit:
• ALT1: ... that after graduating from Duke, Harvard and MIT, the scientist Herman Postma returned to high school to learn Russian?
• There is nothing wrong with the original hook, of course. This is only a suggestion. Good luck! Surtsicna (talk) 16:26, 9 February 2013 (UTC)
  • I prefer ALT1, I think it flows better. James086^Talk 16:31, 9 February 2013 (UTC)