Template:Did you know nominations/Holodiscus dumosus
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 14:43, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
Holodiscus dumosus[edit]
... that the bush oceanspray (pictured) has a wetter habitat than the creambush oceanspray?
- Reviewed: English Vinglish
Created/expanded by IceCreamAntisocial (talk). Nominated by Rcej (talk) at 10:32, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Everything looks good, but to me the hook is a bland. Might I suggest something from the uses section like:
*ALT1:... that Native Americans used bush oceanspray (pictured) as medication for stomachaches and colds?- ALT2:... that explorers in the American West used wood from the bush oceanspray (pictured) to make nails?
At any rate this is good to go. -- Leech44