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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 17:19, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
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Home Run Apple
[edit]- ... that despite the Home Run Apple (pictured) being raised only for New York Mets home runs, it was raised for the New York Yankees' Daryl Strawberry? Source: ABC News
- ALT1:... that New York Mets fans once booed the Home Run Apple (pictured) for over 2 minutes because it was not raised for a Mets home run? Source: NJ
- Reviewed: John Brown (doctor)
- Comment: For 3 April, Mets home opening day
Converted from a redirect by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 09:54, 11 March 2017 (UTC).
Date, size, refs, copyvio, neutrality, all good. But I think the hook is unclear. I'd propose adding the word exceptionally or such to the hook to make it more claer, and to link the terms New York Mets, New York Yankees and Daryl Strawberry. Ping me when this is done so I can review the revised hook. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:32, 11 March 2017 (UTC)
- @Piotrus: Strictly speaking, WP:DYKHOOK doesn't require that and I feel that to do that would be WP:OLINK as it would be putting focus on the other teams rather than the apple. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 07:46, 12 March 2017 (UTC)
- @Piotrus:? The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 10:36, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
Since those were only suggestions, yes, it's GTG.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:35, 15 March 2017 (UTC)