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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:35, 18 April 2012 (UTC)

Humboldt Bay Life-Saving Station

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Humboldt Bay Life-Saving Station

Created/expanded by Ellin Beltz (talk). Self nom at 22:33, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

I reviewed Abbott's Booby in QPQ Template:Did you know nominations/Abbott's Booby; this is my 3rd DYK nom, but I do not know how to add that to this template, sorry! Ellin Beltz (talk) 03:56, 9 April 2012 (UTC)

Review Over 8,000 characters. New article, so no question of timeliness. In line citations check. No copy violation problems. Hook checked. Found URL to main citation. I fixed citation forms. Only question is whether it is "the only remaining" or instead 'one of few.' Otherwise,nicely done! 7&6=thirteen () 19:09, 14 April 2012 (UTC)

Thank you!! The statement about the marine railways being the last in an actual Coast Guard building on the Pacific is from [1] page 3 "The only other marine railway in California is at the Point Reyes Station, now part of the Point Reyes National Seashore and no longer an operating Coast Guard station." I tried to think of exactly how to phrase that, if you think perhaps it needs to be changed, I'd be grateful if you made a suggestion for the hook. Again thank you for your review, most appreciated! Ellin Beltz (talk) 19:40, 14 April 2012 (UTC)
Hook checked and verified as the only operational Coast Guard building possessing a marine railway - added the word "operational" to the hook for clarity. Good to go. - The Bushranger One ping only 21:40, 17 April 2012 (UTC)