Template:Did you know nominations/IPhone SE

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:11, 12 April 2016 (UTC)

IPhone SE

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• ... that the iPhone SE is available in gray, silver, gold, and rose-gold finishes?

• Reviewed: Telescopium Herschelii

Converted from a redirect by ViperSnake151 (talk). Nominated by SSTflyer (talk) at 05:53, 24 March 2016 (UTC).

• Re the hook: who gives a shit? Can we have something interesting, please? EEng 23:29, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Time for a review. This article reports 39.0% copyvio coming from Wired although it is a quote. I have to agree with EEng#s; this hook is as interesting as Ferraris is also offered in red. So I can't pass unless you come up with another but more interesting hook Donnie Park (talk) 11:39, 10 April 2016 (UTC)

• ALT1: ... that apart from matte-chamfered edges and an inset stainless steel rear Apple logo, the exterior design of the iPhone SE is nearly identical to that of the iPhone 5S? SSTflyer 13:56, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

• much better than the original hook. Donnie Park (talk) 14:40, 11 April 2016 (UTC)