Template:Did you know nominations/IWRG La Gran Cruzada
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:58, 26 July 2016 (UTC)
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IWRG La Gran Cruzada[edit]
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that by winning the La Gran Cruzada tournament that wrestler would become the number one contender for the IWRG Rey del Ring Championship or the IWRG Intercontinental Heavyweight Championship?
- Reviewed: Fallout 4: Far Harbor
Created by MPJ-DK (talk). Self-nominated at 21:23, 4 July 2016 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral, but with sources in Spanish, I was unable to consider copyright issues. The last bit of the hook is incorrect because not all wrestlers are heavyweight. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:33, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
- @Cwmhiraeth: I see what you are saying, Alt1 changes tense to instead of talking about what a potential winner could become to what the actual winner DID become, going from theoretical to specific and thus 100% correct. MPJ-DK 11:37, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
- Alt1= ... that by winning the La Gran Cruzada tournament, that wrestler became the number one contender for the IWRG Rey del Ring Championship or the IWRG Intercontinental Heavyweight Championship?
- I obviously failed to make myself clear; it was the "heavyweight" part that I thought inaccurate and would have chosen to replace with "in his weight class" or somesuch. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:19, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
- No I got that - I changed it to reflect what the winner actually got, not what they "could have". Article clearly states X-Fly won a heavyweight title match so I made the hook specific. Trying to create a hook to state "whatever weight division" became clunky so I just changed it to look at what the winners actually won. MPJ-DK 12:25, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
Good to go with ALT1. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:44, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
- I obviously failed to make myself clear; it was the "heavyweight" part that I thought inaccurate and would have chosen to replace with "in his weight class" or somesuch. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:19, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
