Template:Did you know nominations/Ichharam Desai
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:12, 26 September 2014 (UTC)
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Ichharam Desai
[edit]- ... that Ichharam Desai compiled the Brihat Kavyadohan, an eight volume anthology on the medieval Gujarati poets and poetry?
Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self nominated at 16:30, 22 September 2014 (UTC).
- There are some issues. The word compiled is not used in the article; and the name of the work is different - Brihat Kavyadohan (without a space). In fact the article doesn't say what he did with this work (written? compiled? edited?); that sentence needs to be copyedited. Once this is fixed, ping me and I'll sign this off. Other issues - neutrality, size, date - seem fine. Copyvio spotcheck gave 0 results. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:34, 23 September 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you for quick review. I tweaked the sentences in the article and the hook to make them consistent with each other. QPQ done too.-Nizil (talk) 08:59, 23 September 2014 (UTC)
- Now GTG. But, User:Nizil Shah,, could you also clarify the prior sentence? What is his relation to the work discussed there? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:06, 23 September 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you for quick review. I tweaked the sentences in the article and the hook to make them consistent with each other. QPQ done too.-Nizil (talk) 08:59, 23 September 2014 (UTC)