Template:Did you know nominations/JBL Paragon
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 20:26, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
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JBL Paragon[edit]
- ... that the JBL Paragon, the world's first domestic stereo loudspeaker system, was 106 inches (270 cm) wide and resembled a sideboard?
- Reviewed: Waitt & Bond
Achieved Good article status on 6 February 2014
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Reviewed against the criteria:
- Article qualifies under 2 criteria; nominated within 2 days of fivefold expansion, GA status on 6 Feb 2014
- Length is "6422 characters (1029 words) of readable prose"
- Meets policies on neutrality and copyright, and appears to be free of close paraphrasing
- Inline citations all check out
- Hook is "125 characters", correctly formatted, interesting, neutral, appears in the article, is accurate and has an inline citation
- → My only concern is that the hook also partially appears in the first paragraph of the "History" section but without a citation. I have added it there too for completeness.
- QPQ done by nominator
- Overall well written article. Green Giant (talk) 12:37, 7 February 2014 (UTC)
