Template:Did you know nominations/Jane Eskind

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 04:52, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

Jane Eskind

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... that Jane Eskind was the first woman to win a statewide election in Tennessee? Boucher, Dave; Tamburin, Adam (August 6, 2016). "Jane Eskind, Tennessee trailblazer and Louisville native, dead at 83". Louisville Courier-Journal. Retrieved September 15, 2019.

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Created by Muboshgu (talk). Self-nominated at 02:16, 16 September 2019 (UTC).

Hi Muboshgu, review follows: article created 15 September; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; hook fact is interesting, mentioned within article, cited to a reliable source and checks out at source; there's a couple of relatively minor issues with close paraphrasing:

"In 1994, Eskind became the first woman to chair the Tennessee Democratic Party" is directly taken from the Associated press article
Likewise "the first woman to win a statewide election in Tennessee" could be rephrased; same source

Once they are sorted and a QPQ added this one should be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 15:43, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

@Dumelow:, QPQ provided, close paraphrasing resolved. – Muboshgu (talk) 19:07, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

, looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 08:20, 23 September 2019 (UTC)