Template:Did you know nominations/Jill Janus

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:44, 26 September 2018 (UTC)

JIll Janus

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• ... that heavy metal vocalist Jill Janus performed under the name Penelope Tuesdae as a topless disc jockey? Source: [1]
  • ALT1:... that heavy metal vocalist Jill Janus performed at the World Trade Center the night before the September 11 attacks? Source: [2]

• Comment: only 4 DYKs, so no QPQs yet. Capital I in the nomination name is an error in my part.

5x expanded by MrLinkinPark333 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:44, 28 August 2018 (UTC).

Review

• Expanded 5x. Assuming article is at 5x now, expansion began 29 edits ago on August 26, 2018 (4 days ago), according to DYK check.
• 2495 characters (423 words) "readable prose size".
• Earwig 2% no copyvio.
• No QPQ. MrLinkinPark333 is currently QPQ exempt.
• I prefer hook 2 (ALT1). Both hooks are cited, approving both.
• Article is well written, cited, and has no tags or obvious issues.

— Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 14:54, 30 August 2018 (UTC)

Please consider doing something about the placement of the "Personal life" section as I feel that the "Death" section should be at the end of the article. I have also corrected the title of the nomination template. — Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 14:54, 30 August 2018 (UTC)

@Frayae: Swapped order of sections per your suggestion. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 16:49, 30 August 2018 (UTC)