Template:Did you know nominations/John Peyton (Royal Navy officer)

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:17, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

John Peyton (Royal Navy officer)

  • ... that a letter written by John Peyton to his wife contains one of the few surviving first-hand accounts of the Battle of the Nile? Source:Hore, Peter (2015). Nelson's Band of Brothers: Lives and Memorials. Barnsley.: Seaforth Publishing. p. 35. ISBN 9781848327795. {{cite book}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
    • ALT1:... that in 1798 John Peyton's ship had one of the longest sick lists in Nelson's fleet? Source: Hore, Peter (2015). Nelson's Band of Brothers: Lives and Memorials. Barnsley.: Seaforth Publishing. p. 34. ISBN 9781848327795. {{cite book}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
    • ALT2:... that following a coach journey with Nelson's wife, John Peyton was excluded from a discussion regarding the French fleet? Source: Hore, Peter (2015). Nelson's Band of Brothers: Lives and Memorials. Barnsley.: Seaforth Publishing. p. 34. ISBN 9781848327795. {{cite book}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)

Moved to mainspace by Ykraps (talk). Self-nominated at 07:44, 14 March 2020 (UTC).

  • This is a solid article, long enough and well sourced, moved to mainspace in date. AGF on offline sources. QPQ has been done. Hook facts are sourced in article. I'm not keen on Alt2, though chronologically accurate it suggests a causality that is not supported in the article/source, where Hore merely wonders if the coach journey had some effect on Nelson's decision. The first hook I think is strongest, and would go well with an anniversary date, but given that it is well over six weeks until the date in question, this would need a specific exemption. Perhaps ask at Wikipedia talk:Did you know to see if a consensus could be gained. Spokoyni (talk) 12:19, 18 March 2020 (UTC)