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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: Promoted by Bruxton (talk) 22:50, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

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Jumbo Brown

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Walter "Jumbo" Brown's 1933 Goudey baseball card
Walter "Jumbo" Brown's 1933 Goudey baseball card

5x expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self-nominated at 17:27, 6 April 2022 (UTC).

    • ALT:1 "... that Jumbo Brown (pictured) gained 68 pounds (31 kg) after he had his tonsils removed? "
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Venkat TL (talk) 19:28, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

  • Muboshgu, Adding the weight in the hook will make it more interesting. how about ALT:1 "... that Jumbo Brown (pictured) gained 68 pounds (31 kg) weight after he had his tonsils removed? " Venkat TL (talk) 19:28, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Venkat TL, Thumbs up icon Except I think the word "weight" after the weight is unnecessary. – Muboshgu (talk) 19:30, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Ofcourse, thanks for the catch. ALT0 is good to proceed, Also added ALT1 and a relook of ALT1 by another reviewer.Venkat TL (talk) 19:36, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
        • ALT1 is interesting and cited inline in the article - good to go. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 19:54, 21 April 2022 (UTC)
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