Template:Did you know nominations/Kareem Joseph (footballer born 1983)

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The result was: promoted by Mentoz86 (talk) 10:13, 21 January 2013 (UTC)

Kareem Joseph (footballer born 1983)[edit]

Created/expanded by Mppemberton (talk), LlamaAl (talk). Nominated by LlamaAl (talk) at 01:27, 2 January 2013 (UTC)

  • Good to go. Long enough and new enough with adequate referencing. Hook supported in online source. Found no copyvios with Duplication Detector or Copyvio Detector. Might be able to shorten a bit by removing the "over T&TEC" if needed, but the hook length does fall just within guidelines. Rlendog (talk) 02:40, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
  • I was puzzled as to why "Stallions from Morvant/Laventille" was in italics when I saw it in a prep area—there's rarely a need for italics in a hook, and this didn't strike me as one of those cases—but when I checked the source, the word "Stallions" was nowhere to be found. If you're going to use it as a descriptor of the team—especially in a hook, but also in the article—you need to cite a reliable source that uses it in the same way. Alternatively, you can use the team's actual name in both the article and the hook. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:24, 16 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Hook has been edited directly (note to LlamaAl: please use an ALT hook next time so the original can still be seen and the context of previous comments remains clear); revisions reflect the article (itself also revised) and are properly sourced. The rest of the review approved per Rlendog. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:48, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Great, thanks for the info. --LlamaAl (talk) 03:01, 21 January 2013 (UTC)