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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:33, 19 October 2017 (UTC)

Karim Morani

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5x expanded by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 06:18, 8 October 2017 (UTC).

  • Comment: This hook focuses unduly on a negative aspect of a living person. Keeping WP:BLP in mind a better hook is needed. --Skr15081997 (talk) 07:40, 9 October 2017 (UTC)
@Skr15081997: please have a look at ALT1. Thank you.  FITINDIA  11:15, 9 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Recently expanded article. No plagiarism or POV issue detected. Article's main body has at least one inline citation per paragraph. QPQ has been provided. ALT1 is present in the article and backed by sources. Good to go. --Skr15081997 (talk) 10:45, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
  • I don't think this can go ahead with the present hook because the involvement of the gang is only stated by the police with nobody convicted in a court of law. Although the controversies section is full of hooky details, I don't think we can use any of them because they are just allegations, with no convictions. New hook needed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:51, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
@Cwmhiraeth: please have a look at ALT2. Thank you.  FITINDIA  06:08, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
I should think that would do if you add an inline citation to the appropriate sentence in the article. Let's see if @Skr15081997: will give it a tick. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:33, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
I have add an inline citation to the appropriate sentence in the article. Thank you  FITINDIA  06:58, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
  • In its present state, the article doesn't mention that Chennai Express was a commercial success. The film's title in the hook should be italicized and "hit" replaced by commercially successful. --Skr15081997 (talk) 08:02, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
@Skr15081997: I have made the changes please do have a look. Thank you.  FITINDIA  08:33, 18 October 2017 (UTC)