Template:Did you know nominations/Kiryat Itri

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The result was: promoted by Gilderien Berate|List of good deeds 20:09, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

Kiryat Itri[edit]

Kiryat Itri

  • ... that while the Jerusalem neighborhood of Kiryat Itri (pictured) was built for American Jewish immigrants, the apartments were small by American standards?

Created by Yoninah (talk). Self-nominated at 18:56, 28 June 2015 (UTC).

  • New article (created three days ago) of appropriately long length with sufficiently detailed information. QPQ performed. No copyvio noted. Hook is referenced, and per AGF accepted (though in Hebrew, and I can't run it through google translate). Though the article itself has an image, it is not used for the DYK; presumably because it is not catchy or interesting enough. Epeefleche (talk) 21:41, 28 June 2015 (UTC)
  • @Epeefleche: Thank you for the speedy review, and for the editing and formatting of the article. I do think the image is interesting (I just took it today!), so I'll submit it now. Yoninah (talk) 21:47, 28 June 2015 (UTC)
  • I'm ok with that. BTW -- just a style point of personal preference; there is no need to have refs in the lede, if the text in the body has the appropriate refs. And if the issue is not controversial. So you may wish to remove those. It gives the lede a cleaner look, IMHO. Best. Epeefleche (talk) 22:10, 28 June 2015 (UTC)
  • OK, I did a little editing and reorganizing to take the refs out of the lead. Thanks for the suggestion. Yoninah (talk) 08:05, 29 June 2015 (UTC)