Template:Did you know nominations/Kiyono Yasuno
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:31, 25 February 2018 (UTC)
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Kiyono Yasuno[edit]
- ... that Japanese voice actress Kiyono Yasuno's family moved to Hakodate about a week after she was born in Kyoto Prefecture? Source: [1] "生れ落ちたのは京都ですが、1週間で函館、そのあとすぐに宮城県に引っ越した…らしいです(笑)。"
- ALT1:... that when she young, Japanese voice actress Kiyono Yasuno would watch videos of dubs being recorded to further her interest in voice acting? Source: [2]
- Reviewed: Low milk supply
5x expanded by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Self-nominated at 12:04, 19 February 2018 (UTC).
Verified 5x expanded. Almost everything is cited, but not all of the entries in the list of roles are cited. Additionally, your hooks may need some copyediting. ViperSnake151 Talk 23:50, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
- @ViperSnake151: Unsourced roles have now either been sourced or have been removed. As for copyediting, what needs to be copyedited? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:20, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
- They both seem to be awkwardly-worded ("that when she was young"?). I actually had a better idea;
- ALT3: ... that Kiyono Yasuno began pursuing a career as a voice actress at the age of 9?
- ViperSnake151 Talk 02:54, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
- @ViperSnake151: Not sure if that could work since neither the article nor the source explicitly state at what age did she start to pursue a voice acting career, only at what school grade. Honestly my preference is ALT0, but if there's a way to reword that somehow, feedback is welcome. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:58, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
- ALT4: "... that Kiyono Yasuno furthered her interest in voice acting at a young age by watching videos of dubs being recorded?" ViperSnake151 Talk 01:17, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- @ViperSnake151: I guess that works. Let's see what another reviewer thinks (as you provided your own hooks, another review has to do this).
Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:45, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- @ViperSnake151: I guess that works. Let's see what another reviewer thinks (as you provided your own hooks, another review has to do this).
- @ViperSnake151: Unsourced roles have now either been sourced or have been removed. As for copyediting, what needs to be copyedited? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:20, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
I think ALT4 works the best of all the proposed hooks. It's concise and interesting. Everything else looks good (all of the criteria have been met), too, so I think we're good to go on this one. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 19:17, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
