Template:Did you know nominations/Klingermans Run, Cranberry Run

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 18:39, 7 November 2014 (UTC)

Klingermans Run, Cranberry Run[edit]

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... ~~that although Klingermans Run and the nearby Cranberry Run have similar geologies and land uses, the former is Class A Wild Trout Waters and the latter is incapable of supporting fish life?~~

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Moved to mainspace by Jakec (talk). Self nominated at 17:45, 22 September 2014 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: A solid article. The hook is interesting, and, as indicated in my checklist above, the newness and length of the articles check out, and I couldn't find any major issues regarding sourcing, copyvios, or close paraphrasing. I've accepted offline source AGF. The only issue I've found is that with Cranberry Run has a sub-section dealing with Stranger Hollow, but no explanation as to what Stranger Hollow is and why it is relevant to Cranberry Run. Clear that problem up, and this nomination is ready for the main page. --¿3family6 _contribs 16:09, 4 November 2014 (UTC)

@3family6: Good catch. I did copy a few sentences from Stranger Hollow and forgot to change Stranger Hollow to Cranberry Run while writing that article, but that text was only three days old at the time. --Jakob (talk) 17:07, 4 November 2014 (UTC)

Cleaned up, good to go.--¿3family6 _contribs 18:53, 4 November 2014 (UTC)
- Could we maybe have an ALT hook please? That one is very convoluted and slightly confusing at first glance. Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 19:41, 4 November 2014 (UTC)

I understood it at first glance, but maybe it could be shortened a bit:
ALT1: ... that although Klingermans Run and the nearby Cranberry Run have similar geology, the former is Class A Wild Trout Waters and the latter is incapable of supporting fish life? Yoninah (talk) 23:30, 6 November 2014 (UTC)

@3family6, Panyd, and Yoninah: I suppose ALT1 would work. --Jakob (talk) 23:53, 6 November 2014 (UTC)

It seems there is agreement then.

for ALT 1.--¿3family6 _contribs 04:13, 7 November 2014 (UTC)