Template:Did you know nominations/Kristoffer Olsson

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 09:45, 7 October 2013 (UTC)

Kristoffer Olsson[edit]

Created by ArsenalFan700 (talk), Eden10Hazard (talk), The C of E (talk). Nominated by The C of E (talk) at 14:33, 26 September 2013 (UTC).

  • Length is just about enough. Would be more comfortable if you could add a little bit more. Also the hook is kind of confusingly worded. How about: ALT1: ... that Arsenal's Kristoffer Olsson was offered a trial at Chelsea, but did not attend, and later went through two trials before signing for Arsenal? Regstuff (talk) 14:06, 5 October 2013 (UTC)
OK, how about this: The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 16:28, 5 October 2013 (UTC)
Alt2... that Arsenal's Kristoffer Olsson was offered a trial at Chelsea, but failed to attend, and later went through two trials before signing for Arsenal?
  • Alt2 good to go. Lenght, refs, hook, date of creation check out. I wikilinked Chelsea FC in Alt 2.