Template:Did you know nominations/Letitia Christian Tyler

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 18:26, 10 April 2023 (UTC)

Letitia Christian Tyler

Improved to Good Article status by Thebiguglyalien (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 18:06, 31 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Letitia Christian Tyler; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • Reviewing ... --GRuban (talk) 21:35, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: No DYK problems, but as long as we're here:

  • "Tyler" is often used for her in sentences that talk about both her and her husband of the same name. For example "Tyler generally deferred to her husband, but she made one significant exception when he suggested sending their eldest daughter to a Catholic school, which Tyler adamantly refused." All three people in this sentence are named Tyler! Rephrasing seems called for in multiple sentences like this.
  • "she closely followed norms of the time relating to piety and chastity" which seems out of context. Maybe move it closer to John Tyler kissing her on the hand?
  • "Tyler appears on a 28p (£0.28) commemorative postage stamp from the Isle of Man Post Office, issued May 23, 2006, as part of a series honoring Manx-Americans." - in what way is she a Manx-American? This is the first mention of the Isle of Man in her heritage, maybe mention it earlier? GRuban (talk) 15:35, 1 April 2023 (UTC)