Template:Did you know nominations/Liberalism in the Philippines
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Liberalism in the Philippines
- ... that liberalism in the Philippines was mostly used during revolutions?
Converted from a redirect by TheNuggeteer (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:36, 7 August 2024 (UTC).
- @TheNuggeteer: There are multiple {{page needed}} tags on this article. Please rectify them.--Launchballer 23:38, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
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Long enough, new enough. QPQ done. Earwig highlights a couple of phrases, but I can't think of another way of wording them so calling WP:LIMITED. I think the {{improve categories}} template should be resolved. Could you talk me through the sourcing for the hook?--Launchballer 23:14, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
What do you mean by that? 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 08:04, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
- The hook reads as quite unspecific and vague, the meaning is not clear to a reader with no background. It would be better to have a more specific and concrete fact. CMD (talk) 08:12, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
- Another hook: ALT1: ...that the first liberalist party in the Philippines ended from government suppression? SRC
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗08:25, 12 September 2024 (UTC)- Better, but you'd need an end-of-sentence citation for that party being the first.--Launchballer 10:45, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
- Another hook: ALT1: ...that the first liberalist party in the Philippines ended from government suppression? SRC
