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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 02:42, 24 July 2021 (UTC)

Limete Tower

Limete Tower
Limete Tower

Created by Jupitus Smart (talk). Self-nominated at 17:14, 19 June 2021 (UTC).


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: No - At least one of the sources (the one given in the hook) appears to be inaccurate or unclear.
  • Interesting: No - The proposed hook is inaccurate or, at the very least, needs clarification. The source states That monument to Lumumba started being built in 1971 in a form of 210 meters tower, which actually was at that time the tallest in the world. Perhaps it would have been the tallest monument in the world, but if "tower" is used to refer to any sort of tower, it is wrong (List of tallest structures has a list of other structures that are taller and were built earlier, such as the Empire State Building which is 448.7 meters tall).
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Jupitus Smart: The article looks all right, but you should propose another hook. Unless there is something I missed, it is incorrect to say this was the tallest tower without any other clarification. Epicgenius (talk) 21:53, 19 June 2021 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that the foundation stone for the Limete Tower (pictured) in the Democratic Republic of the Congo was laid by the then Tanzanian president, Julius Nyerere? Source: https://www.radiookapi.net/2020/09/28/actualite/culture/kinshasa-lechangeur-de-limete-abandonne-son-triste-sort

  • @Jupitus Smart: ALT1 is better, but the part about Nyerere being the Tanzanian president isn't yet mentioned on the page itself. Personally, I found it interesting that a French-Tunisian architect and a Yugoslavian company made a monument in the DRC whose foundation stone was laid by the Tanzanian president. Maybe that can be incorporated into the hook. Epicgenius (talk) 14:40, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

ALT2: ... that the Limete Tower (pictured) in the Democratic Republic of the Congo was designed by a French-Tunisian architect, constructed by a Yugoslavian company and had its foundation laid by the then Tanzanian president, Julius Nyerere? Source: https://www.radiookapi.net/2020/09/28/actualite/culture/kinshasa-lechangeur-de-limete-abandonne-son-triste-sort

  • So be it, @Epicgenius:. I have reworded the hook into ALT2 by incorporating its global credentials. Jupitus Smart 17:15, 20 June 2021 (UTC)
  • ALT2 is good to go, followed by ALT1. I have struck ALT0 per above. Epicgenius (talk) 17:28, 20 June 2021 (UTC)
  • At 220 characters, ALT2 is too long. Schwede66 19:59, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
@Schwede66: Please proceed with ALT1 then. Jupitus Smart 20:42, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
I'm done with prep building for today. Schwede66 21:00, 22 July 2021 (UTC)