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List of accolades received by Joe Hisaishi

Created by TechnoSquirrel69 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 15:51, 26 August 2024 (UTC).

  • The article is currently not in compliance with MOS:LEADFORALIST and therefore fails the WP:DYKCOMPLETE criteria for presentability. The list makes the mistake of providing a mini biography of the subject in the first paragraph of the lead, rather than defining the scope of the list and summarizing what is contained in the list. This is a problem not only because it makes the list unfocused, but also because the vast majority of the text is simply parroting back biographical material found elsewhere rather than providing something new. (A hint, if the lead for a list page looks the same as a biography page then it hasn't been written properly)
The lead needs a complete rewrite. I suggest looking at the lead section of List of awards and nominations received by Adele (an FA List) which jumps right in to defining the list and talking about its scope and dispenses with giving a biographical overview altogether. Another example is List of awards and nominations received by Björk which mixes in some biographical content while still staying focused primarily on awards which is where the focus must be when writing a lead section on a list of awards. These are what the lead sections for a list of awards page should look like. Please ping me when the lead has been rewritten and I will do a full review. Best.4meter4 (talk) 21:22, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for the feedback, 4meter4! I'm unable to get to this at the moment due to off-wiki circumstances; I will get you a more substantial response in a few days. TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 03:56, 4 September 2024 (UTC)