Template:Did you know nominations/List of songs recorded by Whitney Houston
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 22:00, 2 September 2013 (UTC)
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List of songs recorded by Whitney Houston[edit]
... that Whitney Houston's (pictured) self-titled debut album became the first debut album by a female artist to generate three US Hot 100 number one singles?
Created by Calvin999 (talk). Self nominated at 10:24, 14 August 2013 (UTC).
- New and long enough, a very interesting subject. Good to go. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:22, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
- I'll propose.
ALT1 ... that in the list of songs recorded by Whitney Houston, three US Hot 100 number one singles were generated from the debut album?Alex ShihTalk 02:49, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
- Two possibilities. A minor copyedit:
ALT1a: ... that in the list of songs recorded by Whitney Houston, three US Hot 100 number-one singles were generated from her debut album?
- It might be pique more interest with the number ones mentioned first:
ALT2: ... that three US Hot 100 number-one singles on the list of songs recorded by Whitney Houston were from her debut album?—BlueMoonset (talk) 03:50, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
- Those are good suggestions, but we don't need to be quite so rigid about including the article title. Here are some variant wordings:
ALT1b: ... that among Whitney Houston's recorded songs, three US Hot 100 number-one singles were generated from her debut album?ALT2a: ... that three of the US Hot 100 number-one singles among the songs recorded by Whitney Houston were from her debut album?--Orlady (talk) 05:20, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
- But none of those work. The whole point of the hook is that the album was the first debut, and the first female debut, album to generate three number one singles, not simply that it generated three number one singles. Lot's of albums have accomplished this since, but the whole point of this one is that it was the first ever debut album, and first ever debut by a female, to accomplish this. And none of those 5 alternative hooks state this. I've got another DYK here atm, and my hooks for it are apparently not interesting enough. I thought I'd come up with a really interesting hook for this one, and yet it's being proposed that its changed, which does not include the interesting part! I'm quite adamant that her album being the first debut, or the first female debut, to generate 3 number-one hits is included, so how about:
ALT3: ... that among Whitney Houston's recorded songs, her debut album became the first to generate three US Hot 100 number-one singles?ALT3a: ... that among Whitney Houston's recorded songs, she became the first female artist to generate three US Hot 100 number-one singles from a debut album?— ₳aron 10:15, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
- The challenge here is that the article is about her song list, but Calvin999's proposed hook is about her first album. Here's another idea for wording the hook (including a more impressive fact that I found in the article and that is supported the cited source):
- ALT4: ... that when three of Whitney Houston's recorded songs on her first album became number-one singles, it was the first time three songs from a debut album reached the top of the Billboard Hot 100? --Orlady (talk) 14:39, 18 August 2013 (UTC)