Template:Did you know nominations/Ludmila Pagliero

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 09:48, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

Ludmila Pagliero

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~~... that Ludmila Pagliero is the first South American to receive the title of étoile?~~

Reviewed: Not a self-nom
Comment: For Women's History Month

Created by Ipigott (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 04:06, 29 March 2014 (UTC).

ALT1: ... that Ludmila Pagliero is the first South American to receive the title of étoile at the Paris Opera Ballet?

Article is new enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. No QPQ needed. However, I don't see the hook ref in footnote 1. Yoninah (talk) 20:39, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

Yes, ALT1 is certainly an improvement.--Ipigott (talk) 20:43, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

But the hook fact is not in the source. The source only says that Ludmila is the first South American dancer in the Paris Opera Ballet. Yoninah (talk) 20:45, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

I really think this is a case of splitting hairs. One cannot possibly become an étoile without being a member of the company. I have now added another French source on her Latin-American origins. If you cannot go along with this, then I suggest:
ALT2: ~~... that Ludmila Pagliero, the first South American at the Paris Opera Ballet, has received the title of étoile?~~--Ipigott (talk) 09:46, 31 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for adding another source. I do think that ALT1 is the best hook. Foreign-language hook ref AGF and cited inline. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 18:10, 31 March 2014 (UTC)