Template:Did you know nominations/Lyle's flying fox

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:48, 9 December 2018 (UTC)

Lyle's flying fox[edit]

5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 20:27, 11 November 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I sort of prefer the original hook. Might want to be careful with the word "orange" from yellow-brown, but it's not really a major issue. Slight GBooks issue with the fruits but I'll AGF for this. Juxlos (talk) 21:05, 13 November 2018 (UTC)