Template:Did you know nominations/Malawi-Mozambique relations

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The result was: rejected by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:07, 24 December 2012 (UTC)
Close paraphrasing

Malawi-Mozambique relations[edit]

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Did you know that Mozambique has an embassy in Lilongwe and a consulate in Blantyre?

Created/expanded by Oakley77 (talk). Nominated by QatarStarsLeague (talk) at 21:38, 21 November 2012 (UTC)

Some issues with close paraphrasing - compare for example "The deal was earlier proposed in 2008, but stalled due to cost concerns" with "First proposed in 2008, the project stalled because of cost concerns." There's a broader issue with neutrality in the article, though - for example, "The moment considered the miraculous act of generosity and sympathy in the two countries relations...After this kindfelt gesture, Malawian relations with Mozambique crumbled under the tenure of Bingu wa Mutharika, notoriously reaching a nadir when Malawian police launched a raid into Mozambique's territory." Nikkimaria (talk) 20:07, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Am just now informing nominator that there are issues. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:34, 9 December 2012 (UTC)

I believe I fixed the article's issues regarding neutrality, and now ask what exactly are the issues with close paraphrasing? QatarStarsLeague (talk) 19:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)

There's a specific example given in Nikkimaria's review, which I see you have not fixed, and there will be others that need to be addressed as well. You can use the Duplication detector tool to check your article against your sources to see what it finds if you want semi-automated help. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:35, 12 December 2012 (UTC)

Close paraphrasing remains unaddressed. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:13, 24 December 2012 (UTC)