Template:Did you know nominations/Marissa Callaghan
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:22, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
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Marissa Callaghan[edit]
- ... that the Northern Ireland national football captain Marissa Callaghan is academy director at her club? Source: Belfast Live
- Reviewed: Olive Scott
Created by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 10:31, 4 November 2017 (UTC).
The article is well written and well cited, however I have concern that the proposed hook will not be interesting to a broad audience. Otherwise, great article! – PhilipTerryGraham (talk · contribs · count) 08:48, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that the Northern Ireland national football captain Marissa Callaghan is also an Irish Football Association ambassador? @PhilipTerryGraham:. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 23:36, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
New reviewer needed to check ALT1 hook and also those criteria not mentioned in the original review: newness, copyvio/close paraphrasing, neutrality, hook sourcing, etc. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:23, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
- Working on completing this review so it can be passed, but just can't get over how incredibly dull the two hooks are! I think it's interesting that she studied abroad on a scholarship though, and could also be a hook, e.g. the captain of the Northern Ireland women's national football team studied in the USA on a football scholarship. I had no idea foreign students could be given sports scholarships...!! @The C of E: if you craft a new hook I'll finish the review. Julia\talk 13:06, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that the Northern Ireland women's national football team captain Marissa Callaghan went to university in the United States on a football scholarship? The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 13:12, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
ALT2 is ready for DYK. Article nominated same day as creation, and has now been checked for copyvio/close paraphrasing & size, is neutral, and hook source is fine. Julia\talk 16:32, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
