Template:Did you know nominations/Mary Sophia Hyde Rice

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:57, 4 September 2018 (UTC)

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Mary Sophia Hyde Rice[edit]

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Created by Penny Richards (talk) and KAVEBEAR (talk). Nominated by KAVEBEAR (talk) at 04:03, 13 August 2018 (UTC).

Interesting life, on good sources, accepted AGF what I can't see, no copyvio obvious. - The hook is fine, sweetly short and interesting, but shouldn't we say somehow future queen and future president? - A few questions for the article:
  • Do you think all readers know what a missionary is?
  • I think most English speaking reader would known. For those who don't know it would be a word like benefactor to look up in the dictionary not to explain in the article.
  • Mention which church in the article?
  • Did she first teach the later president, or why is he mentioned first?
  • How do you feel about an infobox?
  • Added.
  • I normally like a separation of Career and Family, but am not so sure here.
  • "She was widowed." - Why not "Her husband died."? Just curious. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:10, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
  • Changed.
Thank you, also for expanding. Be prepared for the ERRORS people regarding "taught the president" when he wasn't president yet when she taught the person ;) - One more: the last para begins with a playground, and all "it" still mean a playground, no? Clarify preschool? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:50, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
  • The lead is too short. Please say something about her notability in the lead. Yoninah (talk) 23:33, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
  • Thank you for expanding the lead. I just noticed on the talk page that about 1400 characters were copied from William Harrison Rice. While this does not affect the minimum 1500-character count for a new article, Wikipedia policy requires the placement of Template:Copied on both pages. Yoninah (talk) 01:00, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
Done (not by me; I just checked and it was done, on both talk pages). Penny Richards (talk) 21:37, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
Yes. Done. KAVEBEAR (talk) 02:03, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
I like it but we better ask Yoninah. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:37, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
As I mentioned on Penny Richards' page, the Template:Copied was not adequately filled out. It needs to include the diffs showing what was copied and when. Yoninah (talk) 10:52, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
Added but I do not think this is not a part of the DYK criteria process. KAVEBEAR (talk) 15:13, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
@KAVEBEAR: it certainly is part of the DYK review process, if you don't want a comment at WT:DYK. I edited the template, but it's not working so well for me either. Restoring tick per Gerda Arendt's review. Yoninah (talk) 23:47, 3 September 2018 (UTC)
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