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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by 97198 (talk) 23:42, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
Withdrawn by nominator.

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Pabna Mental Hospital

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Mental Hospital, Pabna
Mental Hospital, Pabna

Created by Mehediabedin (talk). Self-nominated at 16:56, 9 June 2022 (UTC).

  • I'm not a fan of the photo, because most of the hospital itself is hidden behind the palms. Szmenderowiecki (talk) 12:53, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

@Szmenderowiecki: Then we can remove the photo from nomination. Mehedi Abedin 13:01, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

  • General eligibility:

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: A QPQ is not needed. The article is ready for promotion, but without the image. The beginning of the hook should be "that the". SL93 (talk) 22:04, 2 July 2022 (UTC) SL93 (talk) 22:00, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

I have tweaked the hook to add it. SL93 (talk) 02:08, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
  • @SL93: I had to change the hook a little bit because the amount isn’t written in the source. Do you think the hook is okay? Or should I propose alternative hook? Mehedi Abedin 14:08, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
    • ALT1 ... that since the establishment of Pabna Mental Hospital, it has treated 79,444 patients and 84% of the patients have been able to leave the hospital?
      • Mehediabedin I could have sworn that I saw the amount there, but I now see everything in that source except the amount. I think that the tweaked original hook is fine now that the amount has been removed. I personally don't think that ALT1 is all that interesting. SL93 (talk) 15:36, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
        • @SL93: Is ALT0 is approved? If so, can you specify that below and perhaps re-add a green tick? Thanks, Z1720 (talk) 16:09, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
          • Now that the amount of compensation has been edited out, it is. SL93 (talk) 16:11, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
          • Z1720 SL93 (talk) 16:11, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
            • @Mehediabedin: I was going to promote this, but I find that the "Criticism" section does not comply with WP:NPOV. A lot of the statements in this section are opinionated statements that are written in Wikivoice. Instead, I think the article should specify who is giving these criticisms (and not just in the citation, but in the actual text). I would also be helpful if the hospital's response was also given to these criticisms. Z1720 (talk) 16:21, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
            • @Z1720: Understand. I will rewrite the section in days (maybe in one day) and will inform you. Mehedi Abedin 17:13, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
            • @Z1720: Done. I gave opinion of hospitals but not every source had authority opinion. Also added reporters and criticizer for their statement in the section. Mehedi Abedin 18:37, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
              • I did a copyedit of the criticism section to smooth out other NPOV concerns, therefore I'm re-adding the tick based on SL93's review above and my concerns being resolved. Z1720 (talk) 19:19, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
I pulled the hook per this discussion at Errors. SL93 (talk) 21:41, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
Yes, it's possible to withdraw a nomination. Marking for closure as withdrawn. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:03, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
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