Template:Did you know nominations/Michael Owens (politician)
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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 23:21, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
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Michael Owens (politician)
- ... that Michael Owens became the first mayor of Mableton, Georgia in over 100 years after winning the 2023 mayoral election? Source: https://www.wabe.org/mableton-first-ever-mayor-talks-his-top-proprieties-for-cobb-countys-largest-city/
Created by Sahaib (talk). Self-nominated at 04:34, 25 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Michael Owens (politician); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 01:59, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
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@Sahaib: Earwig found one major WP:CLOP (a copy-paste) which will need to be rephrased or quoted:
Info (as of this revision): He stated that his grandparents had lived in Cobb County and that his relatives had lived "up and down Veterans Memorial" formerly known as Bankhead Highway.
Ref: Owens said his grandparents had lived in Cobb County, and that his relatives had lived “up and down Veterans Memorial,” formerly Bankhead Highway.
Otherwise, the article looks good, and I'll approve it once the issue is fixed and the QPQ is done. ミラP@Miraclepine 02:43, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: done, thanks for the review. Sahaib (talk) 19:34, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sahaib: You got the QPQ, but the phrase is still not paraphrased enough since it still matches the word pattern from the same source. What do you think of this suggestion, which blends the info into the previous sentence per WP:FIXCLOSEPARA?
Owens was raised in Robbins, North Carolina.[2][3] His grandparents lived in Cobb County, while his grandfather and father were both born in Columbus, Ohio.[3] Owens said that his relatives resided "up and down Veterans Memorial", at the time known as Bankhead Highway.[3]
Once it's incorporated, I will give this nom the greenlight. ミラP@Miraclepine 20:20, 2 January 2024 (UTC)- @Miraclepine: done. Sahaib (talk) 21:03, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
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ALT0. ミラP@Miraclepine 21:06, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
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- @Miraclepine: done. Sahaib (talk) 21:03, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Sahaib: You got the QPQ, but the phrase is still not paraphrased enough since it still matches the word pattern from the same source. What do you think of this suggestion, which blends the info into the previous sentence per WP:FIXCLOSEPARA?
