Template:Did you know nominations/Murder of Joey Fischer

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:20, 28 February 2017 (UTC)

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Murder of Joey Fischer[edit]

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  • ... that Joey Fischer was murdered after he refused to take US$500 to date his ex-girlfriend? Sources: "'Did you know that Mrs. Cisneros offered me money to take Cristina out?'" he asked ... He told them she’d offered him five hundred dollars a month. [1] and "She was said to have offered him $500 to get back together with her daughter Cristina." [2]

Created by ComputerJA (talk). Self-nominated at 17:44, 7 February 2017 (UTC).

  • Alright so let's see what we got.
  • It is new enough
  • It is long enough
  • Hook is cited
  • Article is well written and well sourced.
  • Image fair use rational looks fine to me.
  • QPQ checks out.
  • Copyvio tool doesn't hit on anything beyond three-four words of a phase here and there, no actual issues
  • Hook - "refused to return to his ex-girlfriend" makes it seem like he walked out on her at a party and would not go back in. Perhaps a phrase where it's clear that he was offered money to take her back? If I suggest a hook then I cannot actually approve it.
  • @ComputerJA: If the phrasing can be adjusted I can approve this.  MPJ-DK  03:26, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
  • @ MPJ-DK. Hi – I changed the hook to say "date" rather than "return". Is that better than putting "get back with"? Thanks for your review! ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 03:31, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
  • That works for me, approved.  MPJ-DK  03:39, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
Thank you. If possible, I'd like to get this on the Main Page on March 3rd. Big thanks! ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 03:46, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
  • I put it in the special occasions holding area, hopefully they'll catch that when building the hooks for that date.  MPJ-DK  03:53, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
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